May – August

Daisy finds an interesting cassette tape at a garage sale.

To be perfectly honest I’m not entirely happy with this one. I like the central idea and set up, I really like the first page but then I think it turns into an underdeveloped rehash of an earlier script.

Given more time and space (though it does come in at 3 pages) I would have developed an emotional story for Daisy that ran parallel to Elaine’s.

Having said a that though I’m happy enough to publish it with my name on it. I’ve had scripts on here that I’ve been less than happy with that have connected with someone enough that they tell me it’s one of their favourites. It should be relatively simple to make at least.

Hope you enjoy it.

May – August

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