Clair de Lune

Remy attends Rose’s wedding in an effort to show that he’s okay with being “just friends”.

This week sees the second part in what I’m calling The Paper Trilogy in the vain hope that it will catch on.

I have found lately that instead of scripts that fit nicely into two pages what I seem to be writing is longer stories that are then difficult to squash down into the required length. I found that in this one, making it short and concise meant losing a lot of the subtlety that the dialogue had in the longer drafts. I still like it though.

If you haven’t read last week’s script I wonder if you might read this one first and let me know whether it stands on its own or if you think you need the information from the first part. I’m not entirely sure you could come to this one without any prior knowledge.

Hope you enjoy it.

Clair de Lune

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One thought on “Clair de Lune

  1. I think it stands alone just fine. There is a distinct tone in this one (more sarcasm? Bitterness?) that wasn’t in the last one so I think it can be just a 2 pager. Great x

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