Guest Script: The Deal

Unfortunately I’m going to have to take a few weeks off from Two Pages a Week. It’s because, mainly through this blog, I have gotten quite a lot of writing work that I need to concentrate on. Luckily this means there will be some more great guest script over the next few weeks.

This week’s is from David Crow, a writer-performer currently working on a comedy pilot with Objective Productions.

Of this script he writes:

I like exploring the idea of loneliness and the poignancy it often masks, even in an unhealthy and disturbing relationship. I also like it when people haggle over money – possibly because it’s often used in Hemingway stories and I have ideas above my station…

Hope you enjoy it.

The Deal


Nine Sisters – Epilogue

It seems that last week’s Nine Sisters script was quite divisive. I had a couple of readers send me long emails detailing what they liked about it and their theories on what actually happened but I also had a few readers who read it as a “he woke up and it was all a dream” ending without consequences for the character’s actions.

This was obviously not my intention but the fact that it was read that way by more than one person, I think, suggests that I failed in a way.

That being said it has gotten more five star votes than any other two pager. I still like it and I think I said what I wanted to say with it.

Anyway, here’s the epilogue. No more story really but I thought it would be nice to catch up with the character much later.

Hope you enjoy it.

Nine Sisters – Epilogue

Nine Sisters – Part Three

This is basically the third act of Nine Sisters with an epilogue to follow next week.

The multi-part story has been getting a pretty good response so I think I’ll do it again at some point in the future, I have a few more ideas.

Hope you enjoy part three.

Nine Sisters – Part Three

Nine Sisters – Part One

I have been wanting to do a story in multiple parts, I’m kind of doing one with the Pepper Scripts but I wanted to do more of a single story with a beginning middle and end.

Nine sisters is a story in four parts, this is the basically the first act of the overall story.

Hope you enjoy it.

Nine Sisters – Part One