When reading short screenplays there are a few things that make me bristle, even when, as is often the case, they are completely justified or written by a much better writer than myself. One of those things is having a character waking up to an alarm clock as the beginning of the script and another is having it be solely two people talking in a café.
This is a script about two people talking in a café.
Well obviously it’s about more than just that but ultimately it does come down to two people talking in a café.
Maybe next week’s script will open with a guy being woken by his alarm.
Hope you enjoy it.